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When I last saw the sun by ~Hindered-mind:iconHindered-mind:



I remember it so well. I stood at the shore waiting for the darkness to fade away. I could hear all the creatures of the shadows cry out in fear when your cavalry broke free at the horizon and chased the night away. You never failed to capture the sky with your golden streaks and embrace me with your warmth. You always stole my breath with your beauty but where are you now, my love? Where are you when I sit this dark room in which no light dare enter through these screams? I wait for your golden light to lead me to the end of the tunnel away from all the nefarious things that only your strength can frighten. I wait for you my love. I wait to die.
©2007-2010 ~Hindered-mind
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:iconbuthy-13:
Good job..

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Maybe you should dare glimpse
:iconhindered-mind:
Thank you

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Life is easy; it's dying that's hard.
:iconmilliways:
The 'impact' of this piece does seem to be the protagonist's loneliness and how deep and desperate it goes.

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Xander: (baby talk): Who's a little fear demon? C'mon, who's a little fear demon?
Giles: Don't taunt the fear demon.
Xander: Why? Can he hurt me?
Giles: No, it's just... tacky.
- Member of ~TheSquallFanaticClub *dAKnitters *TheWritersMeow
:iconhindered-mind:
Yeah I wanted to do something different than the physical impact

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Life is easy; it's dying that's hard.
:iconmilliways:
It certainly worked out well.

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Xander: (baby talk): Who's a little fear demon? C'mon, who's a little fear demon?
Giles: Don't taunt the fear demon.
Xander: Why? Can he hurt me?
Giles: No, it's just... tacky.
- Member of ~TheSquallFanaticClub *dAKnitters *TheWritersMeow
:iconhindered-mind:
Thank you

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Life is easy; it's dying that's hard.
:iconninja-penguins:
Impact indeed, very nice work.
:iconhindered-mind:
Thanks

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Life is easy; it's dying that's hard.
:icongollylagger:
very strong piece, and the feeling in it rings true to me. nicely done!

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